Take a Bite out of Research!

Research doesn’t have to be like a rabid animal trying to take a bite out of your backside.  Make peace with it; in fact, make best friends with it.

Research is Phase Two of my outlining stage.  I consider myself lucky because I love to conduct research.  Let’s face it, you can learn something that you didn’t know when you woke up that morning.  How cool is that?

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I divide my research into two categories: information and storyline notes.  I can hear you groaning because now there’s not one type of research, but two!  Hey, I never said that research for your novel would be like eating a box of candy.  Not exactly.  Think more like cotton candy, sticky, usually messy but oh so good.

Research Information:

  • Make appointments to interview professionals, such as doctors, lawyers, police detectives, stockbrokers, etc.  Be sure to have your questions organized, well thought out and written down before talking with any professional.  Don’t forget you may have a friend, co-worker, or family member that can shed some light on your questions.
  • Spend time surfing the Internet to find answers to add depth to your story.  Don’t just use the Internet as your only source of research information.  Be creative and find your answers through various sources.  Your storyline and characters will thank you for it.
  • Comb through books, bookstores, libraries, used bookstores, and any type of retail store that would hold answers to your research questions.
  • Visit all settings or locations (if possible) in person that has anything to do with the story you’re writing, such as towns, places of interest, tourist attractions, rural or city areas, etc.  Take plenty of photos to help keep you inspired.  Digital cameras are awesome for that purpose.  If you can’t visit a particular area, find videos on YouTube, websites, talk to someone who has been there, or dig through more books.

Research Storyline Notes:

  • Create a crime timeline for your story.  This is especially helpful if you’re writing a crime, suspense, mystery or thriller novel.  It’s a place where you can plot your character’s crimes for your own information or how you want to unravel it for the reader.  I do this for myself to keep clues, MOs, forensics from my serial killers straight.  This is where you can do additional research to fill the gaps.
  • Create fact cheat sheets.  Not every novel needs this, but I like to list important notes to remind me or actual facts (forensic, locations, etc.) to make sure that I incorporate correctly into my novel.  I did this for Dark Mind and found many interesting facts about Kauai that I didn’t know about.
  • List character motives and opportunities.  This is one of my favorite things to do because it helps me to keep the reader guessing who is actually the killer.  I make sure that more than one character has the opportunity to kill another.  You make this list as simple or as complicated as you need it to be.

There is no right or wrong way to conduct research for a novel, but make peace with it and have fun.  You will notice that your story will shine and be full of depth if you take the extra time to research.

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Hell’s Belle – The Matronly Face of a Brutal Serial Killer?

Interestingly, we have a difficult time wrapping our minds around the fact that there have been “female” serial killers throughout history.  Many times these fiendish femme fetales have had a different approach to offing their unsuspecting victims such as with poison, suffocation, and even starvation as opposed to shootings, knifings, and blunt force traumas inflicted by their usual “male” counterparts.

This particular female serial killer had many unusual components to her alleged crimes and some unsolved mysteries that still stand today.  In fact, she was considered a rare psychopath who enjoyed slaughtering her victims for the thrill and joy of it and in the most savage manner according to historians and accounts of the events.  There had been speculations of her alleged heinous crimes, which began with a store fire and continued with other fires, many unexplained deaths, disappearances, and insurance money.  In addition, researchers didn’t find any children (as pictured below) that were said to have died, two in infancy from acute colitis.

Belle Gunness was a lady fair,
In Indiana State.
She weighed about three hundred pounds,
And that is quite some weight.

That she was stronger than a man
Her neighbors all did own;
She butchered hogs right easily,
And did it all alone.

But hogs were just a sideline
She indulged in now and then;
Her favorite occupation
Was a-butchering of men…

(Note: Poem about Belle Gunness, author unknown)

Subject:

Belle Sorenson Gunness (Born 1859 – Died 1908?) was a Norwegian-American alleged serial killer.  It was claimed that she killed most of her suitors and boyfriends, and her two daughters, Myrtle and Lucy (pictured above), but it was never definitely proven that she even had children of her own (only according to a U.S. Census in Chicago taken in 1900).  She may also have killed both of her husbands and all of her children including a foster daughter, on different occasions.  Her apparent motives involved collecting life insurance benefits.  She was referred to as “America’s Female Bluebeard” and her home was called a “murder farm” according to newspapers accounts.

Victims:

Reports estimated that she killed more than 40 people over several decades including children, husbands, farm workers, and well to do suitors.  Bizarre incidents, disappearances, and unexplained deaths surrounded Belle Gunness and her farm in northern Indiana.

In 1908, there were a dozen butchered corpses discovered buried around her property.  The farm turned into a macabre tourist attraction and was visited by approximately ten thousand curious onlookers.

Signature:

It was suggested that she used strychnine as her lethal means or modus operandi.  However, the bodies that were dug up on the Indiana farm told a far more sinister story.  They were hacked to death, with the heads, arms, and legs removed in a savage manner.  This indicated that the killer used a specific signature to complete the task.

Was greed her driving compulsion? Or, was it the thrill of the kill?

Span of Killings:

It was believed that she killed for decades, but other reports suggested the span of killing to be from 1900 – 1908.

Ray Lamphere:

Ray Lampehere was a hired farm hand and in love with Gunness.  He was said that he would perform any chore for her no matter how gruesome.  He also became jealous of the many men who visited Gunness and made many scenes.  In early 1908, Lamphere was fired and Gunness declared to the La Porte courthouse that he wasn’t in his right mind.  He later became a murder suspect in the investigation.

Was this a great deception by Gunness to cover her tracks and set up her own death? Was he the fall guy?

Note:

An unverified story surfaced about Belle Gunness from 1877 that she was brutally attacked by a man while pregnant, which caused her to miscarry.  The man was never prosecuted for the crime.

Was this what set Gunness’ killing spree in motion?

Conclusion:

Belle Gunness is said to have died in a house fire in 1908, but many claimed she staged her death and fled the state with the money she had accumulated from the men she killed.  A woman’s body was discovered in the cellar decapitated, but was too small in stature to have been her.  It was never proven that the charred woman’s body was indeed Belle Gunness.

There were numerous stories, many that were unsubstantiated, surrounding Belle Gunness and what went on at her farm.  However, there were too many deaths and unanswered questions with one person in the middle of it to ignore.  It’s my theory that there are definite truths woven in between the stories and deaths, which makes for a chilling account.  We may never know the entire truth, but it makes for an interesting study and inspiration for crime fiction writers.

You can view actual photos of the Gunness Farm here: Gunness Farm Photographs

Was Belle Gunness a cold-blooded psychopathic killer? Was it misinformation, an urban legend or gossip passed down through the generations? What do you think?            

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Would Your Hometown Be a Good Host for a Thrilling Storyline?

More prominently than in any of my previous novels, the physical environment I depict in Dark Mind plays a pivotal role in the development of the story.  Set on the Hawaiian island of Kauai, the book offers the stark contrast that those who visit the land will discover between the gorgeous beaches and breathtaking sunsets and the dense forests that are filled with strange shadows and rugged acres that are likely terrifying to anyone but a native.  I chose the location following my own visits to Kauai, when of course I had my author mind on alert and realized what an amazing backdrop it offered.

So, that got me thinking . . . how would your hometown serve as the setting for a thriller novel?  Are there certain buildings or roads or landscapes that lend themselves to a serial killer on the loose or a sting operation ready to unfold?  Here are a couple of examples:

Chicago – The wind blazed through Anne’s hair as she walked along Lake Michigan and thought that winter always seemed to come too soon in her beloved city.  While she busied herself with some window shopping along the Miracle Mile, someone from her past was watching her from 100 stories above, in the Sears Tower, and would soon give her chills unlike any December she had experienced.

Nashville – He had stumbled in and out of the honky tonks all night long, draining beer bottles and buying shots for any attractive girl who crossed his path.  He was building up the courage to start on a quest that would be more violent and leave more broken hearts than any country song could hope to do.

I would love to read some of your ideas for using your town as an essential character in a story of crime and psychological terror.  If you’re convincing, I just might need to make a visit and get some ideas for my next book!

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First Campaigner Challenge 2012 – Flash Fiction “Mind’s Eye”

I am so excited! I’ve never participated in this type of writers’ campaign challenge before AND I’ve never written flash fiction. What a newbie I am!  Woohoo!  Bring it on!

I’m participating in the 4th Writers’ Building Campaign with Rachael Harrie.

Here’s the writing challenge and I chose to accept it with a vengeance:

Write a short story/flash fiction story in 200 words or less, excluding the title. It can be in any format, including a poem. Begin the story with the words, “Shadows crept across the wall”. These five words will be included in the word count.

If you want to give yourself an added challenge (optional), do one or more of these:

  • end the story with the words: “everything faded.” (also included in the word count)
  • include the word “orange” in the story
  • write in the same genre you normally write
  • make your story 200 words exactly!

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Mind’s Eye

Shadows crept across the wall. There was no mistaking it this time; he followed me from my nightmares into the daytime.  First, it was only my erratic imagination filled with bizarre shades of orange and tinges of red.

There were days he stalked my peripheral vision, but now he appeared all of the time.  No one else gave any indication or noticed him lurking in the shadows.

The dark, hypnotic movement of his fingers, elongated and branchlike attached to thick arms and a stocky upper body came into view across walls, sides of buildings, and etched in between trees in the park.  It was always the same, he beckoned me into his realm.  It was a paranormal world filled with chaos and mayhem.

I fought to resist his temptations.   I saw glimpses of his handiwork and reprimanded myself for even contemplating it.  I hurried away.  It didn’t matter how fast I ran, he was always there.

I stood on the high cliff, wind blasting my face and waves crashing below.  It was mesmerizing because of the powerful and swift movement of nature.  I took another step to the edge, daring not to look behind me.  A rock crumbled.  Everything faded…

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Dark Mind Excerpt – Cornered and Pushed to the Limit

Reader Note: This is an excerpt from chapter three of DARK MIND.  It is not a story spoiler.  Emily Stone must decide how she will get out of her dangerous situation deep in the jungle of Kauai.

Two tattered wicker chairs sat on opposite sides of the porch in front of two sash windows.  The screens around the sitting area used to keep most pesky mosquitoes away had long since deteriorated, curled and ripped vertically from age and constant humidity.

First step, then the second onto the porch felt like a carnival fun house with sloping sides and uneven movement from the weight of two people.

The blonde man pushed Emily’s left shoulder with the barrel of the gun urging her into the house.  The rickety screen door squeaked as Emily slowly pulled it open, it slipped slightly off at a strange angle due to neglect.

Darkness greeted her with an unknown agenda.

She contemplated her next move and waited for an opening to pounce – the sooner the better.  The man didn’t expect any resistance from a woman who appeared submissive and frightened – all the classic victim behaviors that Emily was not.

The brightness outside wasn’t enough to overexpose her eyesight inside the cottage.  The interior windows covered with heavy black drapes and lack of any luminescent made for a creepy entrance.  Slasher movies with chainsaw murderers flashed through her mind.

The hair stood up on the back of Emily’s neck even before the pungent smell of old garbage, booze, and human body sweat hit her senses.  The putrid odor kept increasing as she moved deeper into the living room and made her swallow hard to keep from gagging.  She knew if she continued into the house it would be next to impossible to escape – too many unknowns not in her favor.

Elements of surprise slowed her pace.  She counted down the seconds and inventoried the thrift store furniture consisting of a broken down couch with protruding springs, two overstuffed, mismatched chairs, and a small fold out table with two straight back chairs.

Pieces of mangoes, pineapples, and empty beer bottles covered the table; the fruit had turned dark around the edges allowing flies to feast on the blackened remnants.

“Company.”  The British man announced as the screen door slammed shut behind them, the broken door still wobbled on its rusted hinges, squeaking for a few seconds.

Emily’s odds for escape now doubled with two people in the house, instead of just one man with a shotgun.

Her uncertainties now realized.

Trapped.

Small steps forward, left foot, right foot, then pivoting to the left and spinning around to face her attacker, Emily pounced on the man, pressed against him close enough to smell his sickly sweat, and shoved the shotgun upward blasting off a shot through the ceiling.  Splinters and chunks of drywall sprinkled the living room like an early snow dusting of winter in the mountains.

The room echoed from the blast.  A couple of seconds passed before the world had normal audible sounds.

Emily knew she couldn’t overpower the man, but she used her quick self-defense moves to her advantage.

Momentarily stunned, the man blinked twice and before he could retaliate, Emily slammed the heel of her right hand into his face making direct contact with his nose.  Blood instantly spurted from his membranes and she felt the slippery, warm liquid on her hand spattering her face and white t-shirt.

Rage and adrenaline pumped through her body and catapulted her forward as she landed a solid right hook on his jaw.  He didn’t stand a chance and dropped to the floor.  The shotgun flew, completing one full revolution, end over end, and rested next to the sagging couch.

Fighting the urge to kick his face repeatedly for what he had done to the little girl in the basement, Emily took a set of plastic zip ties from her pocket, rolled the bleeding man on his side, and expertly looped his hands.  She pulled them tight – too tight.  She didn’t care.  He moaned, dazed by the blitz attack.

Just as Emily turned to find an entrance to the basement to find Cassie, a large, muscular man with dark tattoos that seemed to ooze around his grubby white tank top grabbed her by the neck and pushed her backwards onto the couch.  Her fall wasn’t cushioned and she could feel every sofa steel spring jab into her back.  Pain pierced her spine.  The hulk of a man pressed his body against Emily and squeezed the air from her lungs.

Paralyzed.

He groped at her sides and her jeans in a frenzy of excitement.

She couldn’t move her arms or wiggle her body loose from his enormous weight thrust against her one hundred-fifteen pound frame.  Slowly turning her head to the left, she saw the dark inked flesh of his right shoulder and sunk her teeth deep into the muscle.  The powerful human jaw cut through the soft tissue and then sliced through the muscle.  He cried out in agony with an animal wail, retreating long enough for Emily to slide out from under him and hit the uneven wooden floor.  Emily crawled toward the shotgun and prayed that it had another bullet in the chamber.

Before she could reach the gun, she was tugged roughly by her hair, dragged a couple of feet backward, picked up like a rag doll, and thrown to the floor on the other side of the room.  The huge man with a long ponytail stood in front of the door blocking any means of escape for Emily.

Bleeding from his shoulder, red ooze seeped further down his shirt as he stood staring at her with a wide, terrifying smile on his face, reminiscent of the inbred family member intent on wreaking havoc on any unsuspecting visitor who happened upon their place in the woods.  It piqued some type of sick, twisted game to him.  He was oblivious to his partner lying on the floor whimpering softly and didn’t care if he were alive or dead.  His focus was on Emily as his personal sadistic plaything until he killed her.

Not clear if he was a brutal psychopath or merely a caged wild animal that acted as the muscle partner in crime, Emily knew she was out manned, out maneuvered, and out gunned.

She stood up shakily and readied herself in a standoff against her opponent.  Her options were to hope that Rick would rescue her, probably not going to happen soon enough, or hand-to-hand combat with an overdriven testosterone, dominated Neanderthal, which was highly unlikely, or plan three…

She tried to stand up straight to size up the fervent man as a sharp, searing pain exploded down the base of her neck to her lower back, like a lightning bolt, which caused her knees to quiver.  Light headed with difficulty breathing, Emily remembered her early training at the police academy, which seemed like another lifetime ago.  She kept her physical training updated even though she wasn’t a sworn police officer anymore.

She pushed off with her left foot and took three well-placed steps, covered her face leading with her elbows, and crashed through the single pane, sash window.  She tucked and rolled at the perfect time, hit the catawampus porch, bounced once, and continued down the two stairs to the soft, reddish dirt of the island.

Excerpt from Dark Mind
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Copyright © 2011 Jennifer Chase

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California Serial Killer Leads Authorities to Human Remains in Well

Major pieces of machinery recently finished upending layers of earth outside of Sacramento, California that may lead to closure for some families after twenty or more years.  Already convicted of four murders, Wesley Shermantine, known as one of two “Speed Freak Killers,” has drawn a map from inside his prison cell to lead authorities to the remains of an unknown number of victims.  With that paper in hand, the tractors got to work.

The efforts focused on a 19th century well and thousands of pieces and fragments of bone have been discovered, along with purses, jewelry, and other personal items.  The process that lies before the medical examiners now is a tedious one, as they now must study evidence that has been buried in up to 50 feet of dirt and water for decades.

The “Speed Freak Killers” are two childhood friends, the already mentioned Shermantine and his buddy Loren Herzog, who were known for their drug use and who committed their first murder together the year after they graduated from high school.  Their drug of choice was methamphetamine, and as a doctor who was interviewed about the duo shared, violent acts become even more brutal on meth and, “If you look at meth murders, they didn’t just stab ’em once. You stabbed them 50 times.”

Shermantine was sentenced to death for killing four women. Herzog was supposed to serve more than 70 years for the same crimes but was let out of prison in September 2010 after only 14 years due to some legal maneuvering and good behavior.  Herzog committed suicide two months ago after learning that his friend was going to share the locations of their victims’ bodies.   So, while it appears that the justice system cannot do anymore to these two men in light of the new evidence that is being discovered, at least some moms and dads may finally be able to bury their children.

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5 Questions for Vigilante Detective Emily Stone

I receive many questions about the heroine in my Emily Stone Thriller Series.  I thought it might be fun to ask her a few questions.  She was my inspiration and creation after a personal experience with a real psychopath.  But enough about me, let us ask Emily Stone a few questions.

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Jennifer Chase:  Thank you Ms. Stone for taking the time to stop by to answer five questions.  I know that you have never given an interview because you work covertly and wish to remain anonymous.

First, tell us a little bit about your working background.

Emily Stone:  I was a police deputy sheriff for almost eight years in Indiana.  I worked patrol, special investigations and SWAT.  My primary interest was to work child cases.  I felt it was where I could make a difference.  I studied forensics and criminal profiling intensely through college courses and police seminars.

JC:  Now you are working on your own hunting down serial killers and child abductors.  What made you decide to quit the police department and work on your own?

Emily Stone:  Why not? I have the background, training, and determination.  It’s a calling, or need if you will, that I feel strongly about.  Why I quit the department is a personal decision that I’m not prepared to discuss right now.  I find that I could do more work effectively behind the scenes as a ghost detective unrestrained by police politics in order to assist various law enforcement agencies.  They’ve never questioned my anonymous emails or where my complete investigations came from.  In fact, they are relieved to have assistance and most of the time the forensic evidence helps to find a serial killer or child abductor.

JC:  It must be dangerous work.  Do you ever worry about your personal safety? 

Emily Stone:  Of course, but I plan ahead, make deliberate decisions and do not act on impulse or emotions.  Well… at least most of the time (softly laughs).  I’m an expert with firearms and self-defense.  I’m also fortunate to have someone on my side – so I’m not alone now.  I don’t know if I would have quit or found another way of conducting my investigations if it weren’t for him.

JC:  I’m familiar with serial crime and what potentially drives the various types of serial killers. Give us an example of your method of finding a serial killer.

Emily Stone:  This is a complex question, but I will give you a quick overview in the time I have available.  I start at the beginning with the crime scene or crime scenes. I ask myself many questions.  Why this particular area to kill or dump the body?  What does this area mean to the killer? What behavioral evidence is evident from the crime? Quite often, police overlook the areas that are indeed part of the crime scene, such as the areas that transport a person to the actual dumping ground.  I make the crime scene areas much larger in my investigations than the police initially conducted theirs.  Almost like clockwork, I find subtle clues that helps to give the beginning insight into the killer’s motives, behavior, modus operandi, signature, and if and when he’ll kill again.  Every case is different, but my methods are the same.

JC:  Ms. Stone where do you see yourself in the next few years?

Emily Stone:  That’s your sixth question.  I’m sorry, but those cases haven’t been written yet and I’m not prepared to discuss them with you.

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As you can see, Emily Stone seems to be capable and matter of fact when it comes to her covert investigative work, but her anonymity is imperative for her to be effective with these types of cases.

If you would like to find out how she handles herself in forensic investigations and what happens when she’s confronted by the bad guys, check out her newest case in Dark Mind.

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